my friend liming is twenty years old .he was studied well in the school .but he likes always help people .he helps buy some water and helps some people something .in summer once my bike was broken .i told he .sooner or later he fit my bike well .i said ""thank you "".but he said ""it is no problem ""so he was studied not well .but he likes help people .and he feels very well .there is an old english saying ""there must be a use for my ralent题目是""天生我才必有用:举一个身边的例子 孙老师帮我改改看看要按25分能给多少分!

我觉得20分合适，呵呵！

,ralent是否拼错了？My friend ,Liming is twenty years old .He studies hard in the school and he always likes to help others . He helps his classmates to buy water and do something else .Last summer, once I told him that my bike had been broken .Soon he fixed it for me .I said ""thank you ",but he just replied ""it is no problem "". Even though he is studying not well now ,I thing that he is a good student.There is an old saying in English.""There must be a use for my talent.""文章构思很好,从介绍同学开始,举例说明他喜欢帮助别人,竟管他目前学习成绩不佳,我还是认为他是一个好学生.文章结尾你用了一句谚语点明主题.文章是篇好文章,但语法错误多了一点,应该加强基础语法的学习,相信你一定能写出好文章.孙老师