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 | , I was passing by the school gym at about 10 am. this morning when I heard someone crying for help. Immediately,I entered in, finding that my classmate LiMing was lying on the ground.Due to his falling from the double bars,both his legs were judged.Without any hesitating,I sent him to the school clinic.Though missing one class,I did such a good thing being worth doing.
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作者: 121.12.176.* 2007-05-22 18:58:07 |
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| ,I was passing by the school gym at about 10 am. this morning when I heard someone crying for help. I rushed in, finding that my classmate LiMing was lying on the ground. Due to his falling from the double bars(e double bars什么意思？), both his legs were judged.Without any hesitating,I sent him to the school clinic.Though missing one class,I did such a good thing that is worth doing.写的非常好！！第一句就很妙，when用的很好，主句时态正确，介词分词都用的不错！看的出来，你听课很用心。悟性很高。
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作者: [孙老师课堂] 2007-05-23 10:57:02
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| ,只是...对于高考...还是很没信心只能多加练习高考时,时间紧逼又怎允许我修改作文呢小作文还可以,但是任务性作文,总要想很久
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作者: 121.12.230.* 2007-05-23 20:30:19
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| 15分满分,这篇文章老师可以多少分?
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作者: 121.12.230.* 2007-05-23 20:42:51.000
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| 接近满分！自信人生二百年，会当水击三千里。
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作者: [孙老师课堂] 2007-05-24 07:43:20
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| ,一篇小作文,2007-05-23 20:40:41,3,s,[孙老师课堂],1,2007-05-28 07:51:4916291,121.12.230.21,15分满分,这篇文章老师可以多少分?
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作者: 355 2007-05-23 20:42:51
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